I had a dream last night, and it gave me an awesome idea for... a story (for a movie I guess)...

I call it "Kill No More" (working title).

In a future where people can share their thoughts and memories with each other via a brain implant, there's a girl, an assassin, she's one of the best in the business, and the reason for that is her lack of emotions whenever she's on the job, she never thinks about the people that she kills, she just doing what she needs to, and goes from there to her next target. No one knows her real name, only her nickname as an assassin, "Princess". One day, the day that will change everything for her, she gets two targets to kill, one of them is a well known hacker, known to people on the net as "The Witch", and the other is a mobster, referred to by his people as "The King". The Princess manage to kill The Witch, but not before she implanted a "curse" into her. What that "curse" does is that every time The Princess kill someone, his thoughts and memories are automatically uploaded to her brain. Meaning that every time she kills someone, no matter who, she will see and learn everything about him, about his family, what she took from him the moment she killed him. These thoughts and memories will haunt and torment her. And because of that, she's starting to grow a conscience and think over her life as an assassin, she starts to care about other people, she doesn't want to kill anymore, she doesn't even know if she could keep on living after realizing everything she's done to people and what she made them lose. But now she can't stop, she also absorbed The Witch's memories and learned she has a sister The King is holding as his prisoner and she feels compelled to save her, but she doesn't want to kill The King, even though he seemes to be a horrible person, what she learned by absorbing people's memories is that even the people who seem evil has good in them and people that matters to them and love them. But is killing her only option? Could she really save her without killing anyone?


Well, that's my Pitch! Hope you liked it. Tell me your thoughts in the comments and don't be shy, I can take criticism :)


Oh, and just in case...

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